@luca53023

“maybe block the head as a simple oval and add a center line before refining the eyes, then keep the jaw and neck aligned to that guide so the face feels less flat and the line weight stays even.”

“idk if more detail will fix the waist. maybe draw a soft center line from the chest into the pelvis first, then wrap the belt around that tilt so the arms and waist feel like they share the same turn”

“for the nose maybe just a tiny soft shadow under the tip and nothing else. one small mark sitting a bit above the halfway point between eyes and chin, kinda faint. keeping the line broken instead of a”

“the inner part is easier if you think of it as one big c shape first, then a smaller c tucked inside it. all those little curves come later. also the bowl bit sits deeper than it looks, kinda like a s”

“the mouth looking huge might just be the dark fill. at that head size a thin light curve reads smaller. tuck the corners in so they stay inside the inner eye corners”

“for 3/4 heads the thing that helped me was drawing the eye line and the jaw line as one curve wrapping around the head first, then dropping the eyes onto it. right now the far eye sits a bit high so t”

“the spikes read less if you block the hair as two or three big soft shapes first, then break the edge. maybe keep the back mass a bit fuller so it sits on the skull instead of floating”

“the hands are a bit blown out. maybe a darker shadow where the glove meets the cheek would lock the contact and let the faces take the light”

“the sharp queen vibe is there. maybe fewer loud colors beside the gold would let the edges and crown do more of the work”

“You are being pretty hard on the rendering. Would cleaning every part make Pomni lose some of that episode 7 look?”