@beke

“Hi. I admire the way you know how to use oils. Your work has great quality in the construction of the form and in the use of color values. The expression in the gaze is very well done, as well as the ...”

“Hi! The lower part was perfect, but at eye level the proportions weren’t quite right. It’s a very common mistake to flatten the skull. I recommend first properly blocking in the structure and carefull...”

“I’ve realized that I didn’t really respect the almost-nightfall atmosphere. I think that, to achieve a more subdued mood, I would have worked with darker transparent layers... but I’m not a profession...”

“Hello! I really like your illustration. This mermaid has a lot of personality. I think it’s mainly a matter of contrast. For example, on the rocks you only added a line along the edges for the light… ...”

“Hi!! I love the design of your mermaid!! She’s my favorite! I hope I haven’t ruined it too much with my intervention. I just wanted to offer my visual point of view. I think it would work better if th...”

“I did my best, but it’s true that it’s not an easy position.I connected the lower and upper parts through the spine.”

“Hello. I suggest integrating the body into the structure to make it more creature-like.”

“I think it comes from the fact that the volumes aren’t clearly defined.”