Wow... what beautiful work!! I thoroughly enjoyed it! I could almost taste strawberries and wild berries the whole way through. I love drawings that appeal to the senses! Here’s a summary of what I did: Retouched the hand: I'm suggesting the position that, in my opinion, fits best. Added a few touches of contrast, but not everywhere, to preserve that enchanting atmosphere: by darkening certain areas (the blue background, around the lace); by lightening others (I sometimes pushed the whites a bit more: the hair and the line between the back and the blue background). Changed the expression of the mouth... although perhaps it makes it look less manga? I enlarged the chocolate area and added something so she can quietly enjoy her cake... and I can enjoy it with her too, without seeing her tense and on the edge of the precipice. Added a small touch of blue in the background, which makes the curtains stand out. What do you think? Please let me know if you found this helpful. I can't wait to see more!! | Artwod Feedback