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“idk if more detail will fix the awkward feel. maybe draw one soft curve from the head through the hips first, then hang both legs off hip balls so they share the same tilt. that usually plugs the tors”
“maybe the fix is before the eyes. on a turned head try a light center line down the face and one line across for the eye level, then place both eyes on that line. the far eye also gets a bit narrower ”
“maybe the elbow itself is fine, its more that the raised arm stays one thickness after the bend so it reads like a tube. try tapering the forearm a bit. the feet might sit better if you tilt them so w”
“maybe not a perspective thing so much. the eyes look flat mostly because both are drawn same width, the far one can squash a bit and sit tighter to the nose. also try curving the brow and eye line aro”
“the suit already reads as a vacuum hero. maybe a floor plane and a soft shadow would turn the purple void into a room without stealing him”
“those shows lean on big simple shapes. idk if fran needs a full redesign though, a rounder head and fewer small lines might already feel more cartoony”