Hey! I’d recommend drawing a more solid foundation so that the proportions and perspective of the heads are more accurate. For example, the character’s nose isn’t following the center line you established, which makes the head look wider and throws off the proportions a little. Compare that to drawing the basic structure first, making sure you clearly establish the center line of the head and, if you want, the eye line as well. :) Also, keep in mind that the eyes aren’t flat shapes—they have volume. You can suggest that volume by adding details such as the eyelids or the lower part of the eye (I don’t remember what that part is called, hehe). Also remember that the eye farther away from the camera tends to appear slightly narrower and closer to the nose because of the perspective. :) Hope this helps!

