#15
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“Upon looking at your work, I found the ground is separate from the character visually. What do I mean by this? I looked at the ground and then the girl without my peripheral vision connecting the two....”

“When I said I didn't want to change the drawing, I meant the pose. And yeah, idk how you can remove the drawing from the "monthly challenge"”

“I reworked the form and added more lines because your art was lost in the darkness and there's not a clear separation of form. I added a light direction from above to give it more dimension and drama...”
“You are supposed to post this in the "Mermay Art challenge" section not "challenge of the month"”

“Sorry I didn't add the actual feedback drawing so here it is.”

“Your rendering seems flat and what you could do is use shadows and light to bring out the form of the character. Feedback art; With this I added a dark background and brought a light source from th...”

“Hello, all the edges of your rendering seem to be sharp and I'll suggest you soften some part. Also, when I am rendering what I go for is trying to indicate form with shades and hight so keep that in ...”