Hello, all the edges of your rendering seem to be sharp and I'll suggest you soften some part. Also, when I am rendering what I go for is trying to indicate form with shades and hight so keep that in mind if you are interested. With the feedback, I softened 90% of your edges and I added hard shadow so you can focus on where the light it. I followed your light direction and I made it come from the right. | Artwod Feedback