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Hi! Having a lot of questions is a good sign, but yes let's take it step by step! c: I think if you struggle with creating dynamic shapes , movement & bodies in perspective, start small. The drawover I did is not extremely dynamic yet, but there is a variation in direction. Get comfortable drawing these simplified forms and try to start moving them around! Hope it helps c:
When I said I didn't want to change the drawing, I meant the pose. And yeah, idk how you can remove the drawing from the "monthly challenge"
I reworked the form and added more lines because your art was lost in the darkness and there's not a clear separation of form. I added a light direction from above to give it more dimension and drama. I blurred the foreground (the fish and sea weed to give it less attention). I added additional darkness then added light to the art to balance everything out. Also note; blue tends to make things dark. Lastly, I added bubbles and the other white lines which I've forgotten the official name near the face to bring attention to it. Also, I darkened the tail a bit to remove attention from it. I decided note to change your actual drawing because I don't like to and also it would get complicated for me bcus I'll have to rework it. Hope it helps.
Improve your fundamentals, a 3 min read
Recognize that seeing your creative process diminishes appreciation of your finished work, while viewers experience only the polished magic—so accept compliments and appreciate your art as others do.
Environment
Mermaid
Made improvment of the hands.
WIP Jay Enhypen
I am struggling with capturing his face from my refrence, I made a mistake with choosing my reference a bit, I chose the refrence pose where the face wasn't fully visible and used other refrence for his face so I had to adjust the face angle and how he is looking at the viewer which led to facial structure changes, I can't add my reference in this site because it doesn't support more images. I want you to help me with how do I make look more like Jay.
Page 2 (day 2)
Page 2 (day 2) Trying to be consistent with the challenge. In this drawing, can someone teach me how to make simple backgrounds? ( Other adivces is good too!)
2 sketchbook page
Some arm studys. I wanted to practice the anatomy for the ice arm of the eleven archer character
About linework in general
I finished it by adding this little walrus imp thing. I believe this is currently the absolute limit of my abilities. If there is anything to improve in this i am currently blind to it. I see this as a problem, since if i do not recognize my mistakes i cannot improve further, therefore if anyone can poke holes in this it would be deeply appreciated. Or maybe i should just start learning values already, since linework is kinda the only thing i've ever done.
Ice archer
I got some feedback and tried Applying it, but my request still stands. I think it’s better now, but it could be even better, so any advice on the render or materials like the leather or the ice would help. Thanks!
Behemoth thumbnail idea
I feel like I’m struggle with a few parts to this piece. First one is just the anatomy of the giant. The stomping foot over the figure seems off or maybe it’s the alignment of the back leg. I feel like I like this angle and composition but maybe it’s not as believable as it should be? Any help would be amazing! Also I’m sure I should adjust the colors too, it’s supposed to be a snowy mountain like landscape but I didn’t really set up a good foundation to depict that. Many thanks to all you talented helpers!
Day 2 : Watercolour Foxgloves
Time to dust off the watercolours!
June 2th again again
Day 2 of the Artwod June challenge. Trying to use boxes, cylinders, and form manipilaton that i've learned on the Artwod drawing basics course :) reposting because i put it in the wrong category And i had to fix the leg...