Hi, I really like the colors and the composition. I was wondering which rendering software you use. I'm not sure whether the visible pixels were an intentional stylistic choice or simply a limitation of the process. I've used Krita myself. As for the pupil, I added one, although perhaps that wasn't your intention. In doing so, I may have taken away a little of that unsettling feeling... but I think the sarcastic mouse is enough to keep it. What I mainly brought to the piece was more contrast by adding brighter areas to the eyes, hair, and clothing. I also emphasized some of the cast shadows and used colors close to their complements for those shadow areas. For example, for the yellow shirt, I used a violet tone in the shadow near the neck. I hope this is helpful. | Artwod Feedback