Portrait Man 2

20min portrait. Largely the same problem, I can’t place value and in particular I feel the hair levels down the overall drawing. I also don’t feel like that looks like a closed eye, so it might be a problem with structure as well.

Portrait Man

A ten minute portrait. I have been studying the loomis book for a bit and also just a hint of Oliver sin (though I feel I’m not good enough to get a substantial improvement from Oliver just yet.) The problem is that I’m having a hard time placing shadows, I know loomis goes over that but I haven’t got to that point yet, also I feel as if the structure isn’t that good.

Soifon fan art

any advice for this drawing i need learn eyes mouth and some hand

S-Fy panel

What can I improve ?

portrait

I'm looking for advice on what to work on

deltarune fanart

i nead somomeone to tell me what can i fix in my art

Car sketch

It is everything OK with my sketch? What could a professional artist do better here?

Comic storyboard

Hi all, I’m trying to start working on a comic that has been in my head a while. I know I am far from ‘ready’ but gotta start somewhere so I’m starting basic layouts. This first panel is going for top down looking through the trees at a group training outside. 1. Does it feel correct if the viewer was a bird in on of the trees? 2. Any other notes are appreciated. Thanks!

Drawing for artfight

I couldn't find way to put the scene on the darkness...once again a problem with light and shadows