deltarune fanart

i nead somomeone to tell me what can i fix in my art

Comic storyboard

Hi all, I’m trying to start working on a comic that has been in my head a while. I know I am far from ‘ready’ but gotta start somewhere so I’m starting basic layouts. This first panel is going for top down looking through the trees at a group training outside. 1. Does it feel correct if the viewer was a bird in on of the trees? 2. Any other notes are appreciated. Thanks!

Drawing for artfight

I couldn't find way to put the scene on the darkness...once again a problem with light and shadows

Crocodilian Pyromancer

How would you approach the lower half of this? The ground is supposed to be covered in thin layer of water

Eudizhdbkejd

Shading, highlights and contrast

Illustration feedback

Hi everyone! I hope you're doing well. I had a really hard time with this piece. I'm much more experienced with character art, so I challenged myself to create a full illustration. I have to admit that building a scene and making everything work together was much harder than I expected. I think the hardest part for me was rendering the environment, especially the lighting. Deciding what to leave out, what to treat as a lost edge, and where to add more detail. It all sounds simple in theory, but in practice it was much more challenging hahaha. If you have any feedback or critique, I'd really appreciate it. It would help me improve a lot. Thank you so much!

Orange fan art

I drew orange from deltarune and really like the lighting but the perspective is a bit off (especially with the nose) orange is meant to be looking down at you from above its easy to tell its just a bit off

Sketching cars

Can I do my sketches look more professional?

Sketch July-2026

Is everything OK with anatomy in my sketch?