Hey bud! Amazing work, man! I was looking at your work, and I loved your sketches and painting style. They remind me of Craig Mullins! :) Gotta practice that same rough painting style hehe Anyway, just a few corrections. The eye you mentioned isn't entirely wrong, but I think you could define its shape or contour a little better. Painting yellow over the eyelid makes the shape get a bit lost, which in turn makes the eye look slightly smaller. Also, pay attention to the eye area, since it looks like you painted a double eyelid on the closer eye. I made the mouth a little longer and corrected the shape of the neck a bit. Just tiny details. Hope this helps!
Thank you for the overpaint, it looks better now! I will take those points and work on them further! Appreciate your kind words. Those details made all the difference, thank you for the help!

