Hi it looks really good and the idea and pose is pretty solid I’d try to foreshorten the feet and change up the angle of the shot a bit more , and drawing the angle of the wooden beams to go toward the vanishing point would highlight the character a bit more Also I’d maybe use reference for the hand with the cigarette unless your going for the very short finger look In terms of the lighting I’d try to push the solid black more or try study someone like Mike mignola ( whos really good with solid black or more manga specific , yuskae muratas work on one punch man is phenomenal ) Hope this helps | Artwod Feedback