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Improve your composition and depth, a 3 min read
Master shape language and value composition through a six-step exercise combining rectangles, triangles, and circles to build stronger design instincts.
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Anatomy
I'm still pretty beginner when it comes to art. I used a reference for this pose but it still looks stiff/awkward (?) how to I make it a bit more like dynamic like someone's guard is kinda up?

please show me what i can improve
im very open minded and really want some criticism on basically anything :)

concept art For Rushinda
Struggling with the kimono for the adult version for her as I want it to be more combat but also be something you can wear to fancy events. Also want it fit her character more be something unique & memorable.

my first ych i opened, but it feels a little flat?
i feel like there’s not a lot of contrast, idkkk

Need help with the form/proportions of the Upper torso.
How do I improve the form or proportions of the torso? I feel like something is off about the upper torso's that I'm drawing, I'm mainly just drawing a roundish sort of square for the base of the torso, and adding the chest over it, and just indicating the ribs.

Live portrait in class
I was bored

Background study (35 mins)
Snow practice but I don't understand how to capture the volume of snow ? Also any extra tips would be appreciated!

Street-Musician ,,Hero"
Overall i was pretty happy with my idea here - A Streen-Misician that repurposed his instruments to fight (As a Character for an Heroshooter). But something just feels off and i cant put my finger on it. I feel like some parts of the design make it look amature but I cant figure out what the concept needs to make it feel more cohesive. I purposly left the rendering a bit more rough since i want to practie putting out ideas faster.

oc sketch
i just want to know if the general anatomy of this sketch makes sense, i never draw full bodies and it seems like the torso and arms in particular look a bit iffy but i cant quite put my finger on it