The photo of the drawing was at an angle so hope that does not skew things too much. I traced the lines back to the VP. The ones to the left VP (blue) look decent to me. If this is 2P then the green should be parallel. they don't look bad. I think trying to converge to right VP (red) is the issue. When I try to do this by eye the close VP's are always the most difficult. Maybe try again with a VP off the page to the right.
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Artist's notes:
Heeyy guys drew up this kitchen today, wanted to test myself after simplifying rooms into perspective boxes. I think this is one of my weaker ones, either i wasn't commiting to the converging lines or the lines just don't have that professional polish, what's wrong with it? Pleease let me know!
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Overall you didn’t do too badly. At first glance, whilst the perspective is a little off, everything still reads clearly. Remember that the goal of practicing perspective is to make it intuitive so that you don’t need to draw in a horizon line and VPs. But for practice that can be beneficial. I pulled your photo into procreate to check your lines and you can see they are a little off. Your lines leading to the left of the page are fairly accurate but the lines leading right which has a very close VP are noticeably out. I would suggest moving that Vp a little further right and don’t forget to consider where the horizon is. I wasn’t going to put in the HL but then I noticed the bottom of your range hood compared to the cabinets next to it. Small common sense checks like that can help you catch errors in your drawings. The blue crosses was just me checking if you’d perspective center of the cabinet and fridge and you did pretty well there. So overall well done. Just a few minor tweaks needed.
Thanks, man. Didn't realize how messy the convergence was on the right side