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Hello, i like the designa lot! I just wanted to say that there are some seahorses that are biolumiscent. I think thag would be a cool concept to add when you render the drawing. Maybe its in the dark and it shines or something. I cant find anything else i can be of help. Good luck with the drawing!
This is a really cool concept. I think something that could be a great addition is the with the horizontal ridges on a sea horses body. Could that be turned in some Armour incorporating the spikes? Maybe how the samurai have shoulder sode Armour. (Kinda like plates)
Blurring the line between human and creature with a more seamless transformation could breathe life into the design, moving it beyond the look of a costume. Right now, the concept feels a bit unclear. The character’s undersea warrior identity stands out, and her headwear is truly striking. You might try refining it to be even more graceful and distinctive. The sword pose feels a bit stiff; perhaps reimagining her as an archer would highlight her warrior spirit, if that fits your creative direction.
here i add some roman armor, a cape and a trident. when i look at the sketch i have an idea to make him like a general for poseidon army. i also add some spikes to make the mermaid aggresive or a warrior.. hope this give you some idea and creativity
Hello. I suggest integrating the body into the structure to make it more creature-like.
This feels illegal.... To crtique the man himself. This feed back is quite nit picky and specific, Personally I wouldn't add anything on top because the idea is communicated well, I Get a sense of sea like connotations especially with the sharp splindly shapes found in bascially all things dangerous in the sea. I would change the midrift area because I notice parallel lines which represent structure and rigidity rather than something Organic, I think my changes improve the overall silhoutte. I always try to avoid parrallel lines and 50/50 shapes unless I do it intentionally, But as humans we tend to recreate patterns without noticing.
First thanks for the art tips you provide ! I think I have seen a lot of melee fighters amongst the mermaids so what about going ranged ? We could change the weapons from double swords to bow and harpoon ? Maybe with a massive harpoon and a compound bow ?
Hey Antonio, first off, I love the concept. This is awesome. The gesture is really strong, and the pose has a ton of character. I think you could punch up the warrior vibe even more by incorporating a cultural touchstone similar to a Roman legionnaire-style crest or headdress gesture into the helm design. I also felt like the seahorse anatomy could be pushed a bit further. The added curve in the spines helps reinforce that, and I think you could increase the contrast in the pose by folding the torso more on the right side. I also shifted the tail forward a bit, since seahorses naturally curl and loop their tails forward quite dramatically. You could even push that further by adding more armor to the tail to emphasize it being used defensively. Overall, I think this is an extremely strong start, and I really love the direction it’s heading in. Hope this critique and feedback help!
Like I said im very new with art! Also didn't understand what should I have done so I just made a new one Im sorry
Improve your fundamentals, a 3 min read
Master shape language and value composition through a six-step exercise combining rectangles, triangles, and circles to build stronger design instincts.
Environment
Mermaid
Made improvment of the hands.
WIP Jay Enhypen
I am struggling with capturing his face from my refrence, I made a mistake with choosing my reference a bit, I chose the refrence pose where the face wasn't fully visible and used other refrence for his face so I had to adjust the face angle and how he is looking at the viewer which led to facial structure changes, I can't add my reference in this site because it doesn't support more images. I want you to help me with how do I make look more like Jay.
Page 2 (day 2)
Page 2 (day 2) Trying to be consistent with the challenge. In this drawing, can someone teach me how to make simple backgrounds? ( Other adivces is good too!)
2 sketchbook page
Some arm studys. I wanted to practice the anatomy for the ice arm of the eleven archer character
About linework in general
I finished it by adding this little walrus imp thing. I believe this is currently the absolute limit of my abilities. If there is anything to improve in this i am currently blind to it. I see this as a problem, since if i do not recognize my mistakes i cannot improve further, therefore if anyone can poke holes in this it would be deeply appreciated. Or maybe i should just start learning values already, since linework is kinda the only thing i've ever done.
Ice archer
I got some feedback and tried Applying it, but my request still stands. I think it’s better now, but it could be even better, so any advice on the render or materials like the leather or the ice would help. Thanks!
Behemoth thumbnail idea
I feel like I’m struggle with a few parts to this piece. First one is just the anatomy of the giant. The stomping foot over the figure seems off or maybe it’s the alignment of the back leg. I feel like I like this angle and composition but maybe it’s not as believable as it should be? Any help would be amazing! Also I’m sure I should adjust the colors too, it’s supposed to be a snowy mountain like landscape but I didn’t really set up a good foundation to depict that. Many thanks to all you talented helpers!
Day 2 : Watercolour Foxgloves
Time to dust off the watercolours!
June 2th again again
Day 2 of the Artwod June challenge. Trying to use boxes, cylinders, and form manipilaton that i've learned on the Artwod drawing basics course :) reposting because i put it in the wrong category And i had to fix the leg...