Hello there! I made a few corrections to the characters' poses, particularly the pose of the hunched-over character looking at his phone and the pose of your own character. The back of the hunched-over character looked a bit strange because of that sharp point you drew in the middle of the back. Ideally, you should draw the curvature of the back, and if you want, you can emphasize the upper part of the neck, where the first cervical vertebra is located. This area tends to protrude a little due to the posture of looking at a phone. In the second frame, I think changing the characters' poses a little would make the scene more interesting than having them both in the same pose. For example, maybe someone called out to the guy looking at his phone, so he lifted his head, while the woman is about to take a step forward. As for your own character, you need to make the body follow the twist of the torso. What I mean is that the hips should rotate a little as well, along with the left leg. This makes the pose look more natural and believable, rather than having only the upper torso twist almost 180 degrees. Hope this helps!

Parent panic - Day 7

Artist's notes:

I extract this one from my own memory. (I found my son a moment later but the emotion was true). I still need to improve my figures.

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@fosco5 days ago

Hello there! I made a few corrections to the characters' poses, particularly the pose of the hunched-over character looking at his phone and the pose of your own character. The back of the hunched-over character looked a bit strange because of that sharp point you drew in the middle of the back. Ideally, you should draw the curvature of the back, and if you want, you can emphasize the upper part of the neck, where the first cervical vertebra is located. This area tends to protrude a little due to the posture of looking at a phone. In the second frame, I think changing the characters' poses a little would make the scene more interesting than having them both in the same pose. For example, maybe someone called out to the guy looking at his phone, so he lifted his head, while the woman is about to take a step forward. As for your own character, you need to make the body follow the twist of the torso. What I mean is that the hips should rotate a little as well, along with the left leg. This makes the pose look more natural and believable, rather than having only the upper torso twist almost 180 degrees. Hope this helps!

@aherve5 days ago

Thanks ! I thought about moving the poses between frame 1 and 2, I choose not to because of time constraints but that is definitely better. Noted the tips on the poses. Thanks again.