Hey Anhuang! What a great concept! The cloak is really original and creative! The anatomy in both the front and back views feels a little off, though. I'd recommend pushing the movement of the torso a bit more to better sell the walking motion, as I think that's the most important thing to address. The back view, in particular, needs a stronger sense of motion. I'd focus on correcting the position of the legs and the pelvis, since that's where the pose currently feels off. The hips are a bit too narrow, and the angle of the legs doesn't clearly communicate that the character is walking. I really like when characters interact with their creatures, and I think the hands are a great opportunity to show personality. I like the way you've posed the hands, but I think Loki could interact with the snake more interestingly. That could also improve the overall silhouette. Feel free to try that idea if you like, but I'd prioritize fixing the character's anatomy first. I'd also encourage you to push the design variations a bit further, especially the ones from the second exploration. I think there's still room to make those concepts feel even more distinct. When creating a character portfolio, it is important to demonstrate a solid understanding of anatomy. This is why I always emphasise the importance of practising drawing the human figure using mannequins, and ensuring that the pose conveys a sense of movement to avoid a stiff appearance. Thanks for sharing your submission! | Artwod Feedback