Frieren sketch - Anime - Community Driven Art Feedback Platform

Amelia LastName · 2026-09-06T19:02:11.059Z

Hi guys! This is my first time posting. This is a sketch of Frieren that's still a work in progress. I feel like a few things are off but I can't really tell. It could be the flow of the hair or something in the face? I feel like there isn't a real focal point and my eyes get lost while looking for long. Any general tips are greatly appreciated!!! Thanks

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