Frieren sketch

Hi guys! This is my first time posting. This is a sketch of Frieren that's still a work in progress. I feel like a few things are off but I can't really tell. It could be the flow of the hair or something in the face? I feel like there isn't a real focal point and my eyes get lost while looking for long. Any general tips are greatly appreciated!!! Thanks

DnD character 2020

I realized I mirrored everything from my original sketch so… idk, but any advice with the concept of a cultist serving a demon and a celestial(? i believe they are called in DnD). No idea if I botched perspective and/or form on this one either.

DnD character 2020

Really late for the July challenge but I thought I’d give it a try after practicing realism for a bit/long while (at the urging of a friend who studied animation). It has been an on and off practice with long breaks in-between because of COVID and then switching jobs up until this year I decided that I was going to draw again.

My Artwork

I'm struggling with perspective, form&depth, composition, values, light/color, anatomy, design

Mon œuvre

Je suis aux prises avec anatomy, design

Unexpected visitor

I want the person on the left to exhibit fear. Mouth is giving me a hard time. other side of the face finally feels right but I expect it could be "shallower?". The rest of the perspective feels right I am just double checking my perspective and form before I proceed.

Mi obra

Estoy luchando con values, light/color, anatomy, line quality

My Artwork

I'm struggling with perspective, form&depth, composition, values, light/color, anatomy, design, line quality, other

My Artwork

I'm struggling with perspective, form&depth, anatomy, design