Hi! Your drawing's silhouette is clear and the shapes for the head and hair are defined! I like that! If you can bring that definition to the body I think this would look great! I think the main thing you can improve with your line art is trying to think of each limb as on it's own layer, imagining what is in front of what. In my draw-over I painted in the features that are in the "back" with green (hair in the back, back of the sleeves, the right leg that's stepping a bit behind) and the "front" with dark blue (side bangs, lower arm, chest, left leg stepping forward). By thinking of these parts as laying on top of each other, you'll be more aware of where shadows are made, how clothes fold, etc. Right now your body parts - top shirt, belt, and pants - look more like abstract shapes lacking depth, so adding things like clothes folds and shadows will make the parts look more 3D and alive. Also, experiment with line width! I typically make the lines inside the shape like folds and strands of hair with thin lines, and give the whole figure a thick outline to make my characters stand out. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback