@adayo

“Hi! Your drawing's silhouette is clear and the shapes for the head and hair are defined! I like that! If you can bring that definition to the body I think this would look great! I think the main th”

“Hi! I think you have a really good base- I can tell that the characters have distinct personalities and their posing tells me a bit about their relationship (cute!). What's unfortunate about the curr”

“Hi! First, I like this character's style! They look too cool for that bag of baguettes lol. Apologies for the sloppy lines. I think the most noticeable proportion fixes were the arms and shoulders.”

“Hi! Your drawing is very cute and I think you did great with the hands! The face is very expressive too. The two things that could improve this pose are 1) moving the right hand closer to the cente”