Make sure to watch the initial head proportions. You appeared to have forgotten that hair adds volume to the cranium. Which threw off most of the proportions. Adding volume to the hair, keeping the jawline smooth and 3dimensional would fix a lot of the issues here. I kept the eyes a bit 'drowsey' as in your orignal, because that is very likely to happen. Just make sure to keep the eyes and the eyebrows in the correct proportions of the cranium. Especially when starting out :) Great job, have fun! | Artwod Feedback