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2d animation student, carpentry and wood carving
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“i think start with an out line of the mountians think big shapes small and med. this will help keep it interesting. also use reference it will add alot to it”
“solid piece! Cool pose and character. always try to go light against dark he almost disapears into the background the tones are similar maybe a more saturated red could make him pop more. For the shad...”
“Cool piece Great chataer maybe push the pose play with your edges a hard line edge vs a blured edge put flowing strands in the hair add some story go with abstract symbols put them in perspective mayb...”
“you are getting close. Good job on gathering reference and breaking away from the reference with the design work. not sure if this helps. keep going.”
“your perspective is pretty good. Nice that you see the top edge of the bench. on the legs you can measure the width of one leg and compare it to the other.hope this helps keep going :)”
“i think if you lean the charcter forward the balance will be good. Great drawing!”
“Amazing work on the face and expression maybe if you turn the back a bit so it is more relaxed not sure if you want to put in hands?”
“you almost have a complete turn around front 3/4 side line them up and you have a model sheet for comics or animation. Great character”
“maybe squishing the couch some interaction push and pull on the cusions not sure if this helps hope so cool perspective!”
“Great characters a couple of sugestions.”
“Fosco gave you great notes on the shading just wanted to add a bit about volume and wieght. Keep going cool piece love futuristic wateland robot legs”
“you might like Scott Robertsons work he draws alot of cars adding a shadow adds a lot of depth hope this helps. Cool car!”
“Awesome catch hands tend to take the shape of what they are holding hope the draw over helps”
“everything looks like it is linning up perspective wise some times it helps to draw a box around characters”
“These look solid maybe add floor grids and triangle wedge shapes for the feet will ground the charcters keep going great work!”
“looks pretty solid trust your instints good work keep going!”
“i think pushing expressions or charaturing them as well as features will push you far enough away from the reference hope this helps”
“i think if you locate your light first it will help lots eg is the light low or high is the light in front or behind and if you light up characters that way with big basic forms it will help. Hope thi...”
“i think you have a good formula going on a couple of notes. usually mouth corners are in the middle of the eye”
“Super cool character maybe add some drama with an upshot. tilts push the expression maybe a shocked mouth. Great work!!”
“Great design you know it is a good design when you want to pose the character! I added some notes hope this helps :)”
“Very cool idea! Fun story telling maybe seperate the house from the figure at first i thought she was carrying a giant hammer. maybe adjust the tone on the characters comand u gives you a hue saturati...”
“Cool drawing lots of life! I put some notes into a draw over. hope they help great drawing!”
“fun character i drew up some notes like how you are putting in twists and turns in your character not just a straight on front view adds alot of personality.”
“Great piece I would say the eyes are the main focal point which is great. maybe adding a secondary focal point would be cool. Maybe add a glow to the hair piece. then the eye travels around the image ...”
“have a friend that showed me a few tricks on how to attach the legs to the torso hope this helps nice characters bottom left is your best one! Keep going great work!”
“Such a cool design! A little perspective will add a bit of camera majic but 99% there if you are drawing in a sketch book i put down some notes on how to draw a grid with out drawing in crazy vanishin...”
“very cool piece! i think if you round the ends of the feathers a bit put in some shadows on the bottoms of the feathers you will be rocking! sometimes pulling up ref helps with design choices hope thi...”
“Cool character so much interesting design work. hope this draw over helps with the bow and the legs draw your construction even under costumes it helps to place clothing in a 3d way. Great piece!”
“Very cool piece maybe put in some contours on the tree and lighten one corner of the composition use the leaves to point to her super dynamic piece. Looking forward to seeing more of your work”
“Nice we have grizzly bears up here. Maybe a foreground mid ground back ground always leave one corner either dark or light that way the composition is not even. hope this helps. Cool piece. Bears are ...”
“Gesture drawing can be hard the time limit adds pressure sometimes if you think 3 basic volumes head chest and pelivs it will help speed up the process or the flour sack like in animation.”
“Cool Batman! for an upshot put your horizon low draw a cube for gargoyles head then it is easy to build up from there hope this helps”
“Cool creatures !! Have you ever used dry brushing? I think if you dry brush some compliementry colours in areas it will make ity pop!”
“cool character! I always double check my drawings with construction when they are close to done. that way it is easier to draw in clothes and objects. hope this helps”
“Amazing rendering skills maybe a couple of fixes on the torso and arm.draw a center line drom the chest to the hips the abbs dont line up. hope this helps.”
“Amazing brush work! Wow! just a few sugestions was hard to come up with something such a cool piece!”
“You have very solid foundation skills perspective and anatomy some times i will use the transform and warp tools and scale parts just to break away from generic looks. hope this helps. Very nice found...”
“I think your figures are awesome! Maybe some story telling in your backgrounds like heaven or hell maybe some tubes that drop souls i dont know. But it could definetly be fun. i used his eye as a vani...”
“cool bear creature i put in a few notes mainly on colour and harmonizing colourshope this helps keep going such an interesting character”
“You are definetly on the right track. Very cool owl! I sketched a few animals from imagination. if you use shapes and forms it will help alot and learning the proportions of the animals skeleton will ...”
“as a felllow colour blind artist i know the struggles. Digital art has an advantage over traditional media in that we can colour pick. I used to use a colour blind app where you just hover a curser ov...”
“Very cool piece! Giant Mechs for the win! maybe use two gradients with daker gradients on the mechs shadow side. then erase out the mech might be helpful if you have a clipping mask. for the glow add ...”
“you captured the figure very well for the water try using a gradient on the water then you can add a light side or shadow side on the water ripple. hope this helps. Cool piece!”
“Cool character! If you do one drawing of the character layout a grid then you can easily do a side front and 3/4 the more heads you have the easier it is to do complex angles of them. like an animati...”
“for burns maybe use a textured brush and a darker tone for shadows. I think they used that in a manga i read a long time ago. also thinker line weight on the bottom side. Very interesting character. k...”
“solid painting i think if you double check with the loomis head it will help allign the features raised the ear a bit adjusted the eyes a bit only small tweaks hope this helps”
“Awesome looking piece for the bg find the horizon line draw in a loose grid. not sure exacly what kind of background you want i like animee and the whole cube thing i think looks cool. i also looked u...”
“maybe push your shapes more thick vs skinny tall vs short push the silhouette and expressions cool piece!”
“cool piece the fist looks a little flat maybe just drop the forearm a bit add some depth. Looks amazing!”
“a couple of ideas maybe light bandages to add contrast some depth in the legs hope this helps. Keep going super creepy character I dig it!”
“when drawing a rider always think of the forms under neith the riders legs will follow these forms very cool idea!”
“Cool piece like the tilt in the head and the pose maybe build up your forms a bit more in the hands and add some gravity to the sleave. Very cool keep going”
“Cool pose! sometimes i will break the 3 main shapes into boxes. Boxes help to give structure. Or I will use straight lines against cuved lines. Hope this helps”
“First thing to do when doing perspective is finding the horizon line once you have that it is way easier to build blocks around it weither it is one pt 2 pt or 3 pt. drawing cubes helps with structu...”
“Hello Bread maker cool character like the cyborg face i think putting perspective into your drawings will add a lot of drama”
“Maybe some perspective linesfrom the top and bottom of the heads then you can think about how big the hand and gun are scale wise. I dont know if this helps? Cool piece!”
“you might like edward muybridge for his photos of animals in locomotion. hope this helps.”
“I think when it comes to drawing shapes and forms the big differnce is with forms they are 3d i find always drawing centerlines or a box around the whole form helps me lots. like the bean shape at the...”
“Maybe push the depth a bit exagerate how huge he is also maybe try to push the silhoutee i am a horrible speller :) Super cool design!! Epic”
“Wow second digital art piece ever great work! a few notes on the painting. keep going great job!”
“very cool paintings You might want to try washes to soften out the backgrounds and blend them together. Soft edges is something water colours and gouache do very well for some contrast maybe add more ...”
“Cool character is she part dragon? some notes on the wind and its effects hope this helps :)”
“line weight can be alot of fun i like to think of it almost like a indication of a shadow so usually on the bottom of forms or sometimes heavy line weight can just be used as an emphasis telling your ...”
“very cool expressions are so fun to play with. remember the mouth can say lots of differnt things too adding all these together gives complex expressions. Loomis head makes every thing easier for plac...”
“hope this helps if they are ponies and smaller you can just use ratios off the height of the horse. Nice composition”
“I think it is pretty close. looks like curvalinear perspective. it fits very well within the sphere just make sure all parrallel receding lines go to vp on horizon line. Very cool composition”
“The dramatic back lighting sounds very cool. just a sugestion with the cliffs light against dark and pick your focal point highest contrast in tone and chroma :) Looks awesome wish i could paint skies...”
“Solid drawing you could play with high lights in the hair and some shadows experiment with the background low saturation vs high saturation and complimentry colours hope this helps maybe textures in...”
“Cool piece. We share a lot of the same favorite artists Franzetta, Romita jr. and Takahashi are all great! I think your shadows are working pretty well. a couple of notes on how to plan out lighing an...”
“cool piece i am not very good with colour but I tried. i think in the hair varry your brosh strokes size direction also switch colours back and forth when working on the hair it helps give it some ran...”
“i think it is very solid! Maybe avoid parrallells in the legs parrallels make things look stiff great job on the painting wish i could paint as well as you”
“Great piece maybe darken around the ship and the inside of the alien? maybe add some particles that are floating aroound inside the beam a soft brush line on the outer edge of the alien beam. Super co...”
“they all look pretty solid! for the guy my approach would be get the basic shapes in then look and see if there are tilts like eyes are they straight across or are you looking up or down on the head o...”
“Hello I think the faces are great you could add more tilt to her head but i think just leaning her body in works well. i always like to have a focal pt or a vanishing point it helps direct the eye to ...”
“cool drawing first thing to do is fing the horizon line. where parralell lines meet is the horizon. it ends up being mid hip height on the dad. so any charters hip line would be on the horizon when th...”
“cool knight character maybe push the line of action eye contact and some foreshortening on the sword might help also add wind or elements that always adds a bit to it. Keep going great work!”
“Hello. You have a solid foundation. the top of the eyelid usually catches light use a soft touch and layer your tones. kep an eye for edges like the hair line it is kind of random saw toothif you almo...”
“maybe a bit of light behind her? Very cool piece”
“very cool oil painting you can use triangular shapes to point towards your main focal point. eg the rockstrees which you did use as arrows to point in towards the tent. very nice how you have the grea...”
“Cool character for shading play with the oppacity pick a darker skin tone lower the opacity and paint it where the shadows will drop. for the eyes i always put a layer of black with a 30-50% opacity o...”
“if you almost close your eyes you can see the big shapes of tone in the clouds. use a big brush with a soft touch also rocks in back ground can be basicly dots or dashes the further back the smaller a...”
“It is looking cool i like the pose. look for the simple shapes and forms like cylinders and spheres earlier on the details are much easier once they are in place. Keep going cool pose and character”
“looks cool like a clowd city maybe varry some of your shapes in your clowdsadd a foreground element a mid ground and background. this will add more depth nice work on the perspective ellipses are hard...”
“Great drawing i think just push your darks a bit more also the darkest places on a face are the eye nostril and mouth area. also a reverse gradient dark against the light side of the face will make it...”
“awesome drawing not sure if this helps the pose is very strong not sure if i got the perspective right but felt like the hips could be moved down a bit. Great drawing”
“cool composition maybe push the perspective a bit since it is so high above the horizon make an underside plane kind of like a cube. hope this helps”