@jeremyr

“You can improve your line quality by making sure your pencil is sharpened. However I would recommend you focus more on the fundamentals for now. The best line quality in the world won’t save you if ...”

“Overall you didn’t do too badly. At first glance, whilst the perspective is a little off, everything still reads clearly. Remember that the goal of practicing perspective is to make it intuitive so th...”

“It was a little hard to see what you’d actually drawn but from what I could tell there wasn’t a lot of form in your heads. In general, you start the head with a sphere and then establish the orientat...”

“Not a bad effort. You seem to be struggling more with understanding the basic forms in perspective. I’ve redrawn the cranial mass and the mask in roughly the same angles. Notice I haven’t drawn in any...”

“Creativity isn’t about motivation, it’s about process. Looking at what you’ve drawn I’m seeing some nice gestural lines and good detailing. There are many reasons why you might be feeling unmotivat...”

“To understand how to render you need to understand light and shadow. To understand light and shadow, you need to understand form. Studying form and how light and shadow affects it will make it much e...”

“Getting someones likeness is all about proportions. I started by looking at Jays proportions by drawing the Loomis structure over the top. I noted that his eyes are about half way on his head. The dis...”

“Hi, first of all really nice attempt. I really like your pen work and I think you did a really good job capturing the energy of the expression. The main issue I’m seeing here is in your observation ...”

“I would recommend spending more time focusing on form rather than anatomy, clothing or rendering. Thinking of the figure in these simple 3D forms will help better inform your decision making. Her po...”