Two immediate fixes you could have. The light from outside wouldn’t be hitting the blue wall directly at all. I’d put that whole wall in shadow. Another issue is the window feels really really deep. I think most windows/walls aren’t nearly that thick. When you’re looking at the inside of the window in perspective, it would be foreshortened and look thinner than normal. So knowing that it should look thinner+how thick it is makes it look extra thick.

Winter season

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I did 4 illustration like than, each his for a season this one the winter. I like the ambiance but have difficulties making everything coherent and the lignting. The rendering of each element is different, and maybe the composition could be better?

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@foscohá 3 semanas

Hey! If this is a winter scene, the colors should feel cooler, but right now you’re painting with very warm colors, so you’re not fully considering the local color of the objects within the context of the scene. For example, instead of painting the stairs with a brown that falls within the orange range, try using a brown that leans more toward desaturated reds. By doing this, you’re keeping the local color of the stairs while making it fit better with the overall environment and ambient light of the scene. :) Overall, notice how I gave the scene a cooler mood. Even though the shadows can still remain relatively warm, the image as a whole feels colder. The moonlight itself should also feel cool. Notice as well that I painted some purple tones on the shadows, this adds more color vibrancy to the scene :D You could also add a rim light to the character to help define the silhouette and prevent the character from getting completely lost in the shadows of the stairs. Lastly, the window was a little too wide, so I reduced its width slightly. :) Hope this helps!

@gaiahá 2 semanas

Thanks for the feedback it look much better I will try correct my illustration thank you ! :)

@hannah87400há 3 semanas

Two immediate fixes you could have. The light from outside wouldn’t be hitting the blue wall directly at all. I’d put that whole wall in shadow. Another issue is the window feels really really deep. I think most windows/walls aren’t nearly that thick. When you’re looking at the inside of the window in perspective, it would be foreshortened and look thinner than normal. So knowing that it should look thinner+how thick it is makes it look extra thick.