Hello there! I adjusted the face a little. I felt that the upper part of the head was slightly too long, so I reduced it a bit. I also made the face and the ear slightly wider. I emphasized the volume of the eyes a little more as well (hopefully it’s noticeable, hehe). Adding a bit more volume to the hair could also help improve its overall design. :) Also, try to show the neck more clearly or define its shape a little better, since it gets somewhat lost in your drawing. Hope this helps!

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Erin Pelicano · 2026-10-01T14:24:17.212Z

Ok, so I have a rough sketch of my DnD Character Calgos. He is a Drow Druid, and I feel this design is off in some capacity, either in anatomy, proportion, or highlights/shadows. Any suggestions for improvements to the piece would be most helpful. Thank you kindly!

@foscohá 2 semanas

Hello there! I adjusted the face a little. I felt that the upper part of the head was slightly too long, so I reduced it a bit. I also made the face and the ear slightly wider. I emphasized the volume of the eyes a little more as well (hopefully it’s noticeable, hehe). Adding a bit more volume to the hair could also help improve its overall design. :) Also, try to show the neck more clearly or define its shape a little better, since it gets somewhat lost in your drawing. Hope this helps!

@erintheforemastjill94há 2 semanas

Wow! That looks much better for Calgos! His face is more refined than I envisioned, and you helped with the neck issue I had. I felt I squished it with the pose I chose, and his face definitely wasn't wide enough. His left eye was also an issue, and you helped me there with your redraw, as I couldn't get it right. Thank you so much! I greatly appreciated your help and insight with my character! :D

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