I think it already looks pretty good. Things that are noticeable and could be looked at: 1. Her ears seem to have different size and tilted even though the head is not. I would check ear anatomy again. 2. There is highlight on one eyelid but not on other even though the light comes from above. 3. Try to avoid to draw line between teeth unless there is an actual gap, especially in stylized painting like this - it makes them look a bit too much a cartoon. 4. I would add more of ambient light (blue color in this case) to her skin. 5. Would add few highlights and few strands to the hair to add more volume. 6. Don't forget shadow behind the ear. 7. Check shoulder anatomy. She has very realistic face but too stylized shoulder. 8. Parts with thinner skin and good blood flow (e.g. ears, nose) should reflect a bit more sunlight so add red/orange. 9. Idk what those straps/cables are but I would also add a bit of highlight to them (and one of the shoulder should drop a bit of shadow). | Artwod Feedback