Hello there! I made some corrections and even changed the pose a bit. The perspective was feeling a little off, as the facial features weren't following the same perspective as the torso. The proportions were also slightly off—the legs were longer than the upper body, which made them look a bit strange. On top of that, the way the character was standing on the ground didn't feel entirely convincing, so the pose came across as somewhat awkward. Because of that, I adjusted the pose and also changed the tilt of the torso. Notice how the upper body now has a diagonal tilt, while the hips have an opposing diagonal. This creates a stronger gesture, gives the pose more dynamism, and I'd even say it adds a bit more personality to the character. Hope this helps!
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