Hey! Nice work here! The perspective was a little off, mainly on the front cylinder. Notice that the front ellipse was wider than the back ellipse, which made it feel inconsistent with the box it was attached to. On top of that, the minor axis of the front ellipse was slightly tilted. Remember that the ellipses of a cylinder should share the same minor axis, and in most cases, the front ellipse will appear slightly narrower than the back ellipse. By correcting this cylinder, we also end up correcting the perspective and proportions of the surrounding boxes, as well as the triangular shape on the front. Hope this helps and keep it up! :D
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