Hi there! I am amazed to see your progress with these, absolutely stunning work! I will have to nitpick very heavily. Let's start with the silhouette, you do a great job leaving these negative spaces in the other characters (green), and generally the silhouets are very interesting throughout, so with the 1st figure, try to seperate the drapery and the leg so that they don't perfectly overlap. I think having them overlap, but the drapery breaking the silhouette of the leg would give it a lot more depth (blue). With the second figure, the right leg feels like it was a little bit too short compared to the other when put on a plane in perspective (orange), so I made it a little bit longer. For the third figure, as we are seeing them from above, I would make the belt wrap a bit more around the form of the bodice, as right now it feels a little bit too flat for the volume of the torso (red). And finally, you mentioned ambient occlusion, I think you are doing a great job at applying it, but I think the next step would be to try and use those & your lineart in a more concious way. Try to use them mostly in the place you actually want people to look at first (purple) and draw the attention there, keeping the rest of the figured well-defined as well, but more subtle in comparison. I hope that makes sense! Also please consider this an official friend request, I would like to discuss these characters at length- Keep up the great work!! c:
Omg! Thank you so much Hannah! I really appreciate your thorough feedback! These were all the things I was having trouble picking up on. (I also just went through the beginner drawing course again and loved your feedback videos over there too!) Also- I will make sure to be very mindful about all of those details that you pointed out in everything i draw moving forward. I will, of course, revise this submission in accordance too! Thank you again :) And please consider the friend request very much accepted!
Ahh that's so great to hear!! You're so welcome c: