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“Hi there! I quickly sketched something on top of your drawing, it was definitely a challenging pose! I think the fingers were slightly too short compared to the palm. The overlap and foreshortening in”
“Hello! Folds are a really common struggle, and they are tough. Best thing to keep in mind it to use them only when needed. Instead of trying to add them everywhere, try to pinpoint the places where it”
“Woops! Forgot the paintover, here you go! c:”
“Hi there! If you're struggling with drawing the shoes, try practising simplified feet first because as you pointed out already it is indeed the perspective and form that are key here (and shoes are co”
“Hi there! First off, you can absolutely tell it's an elf and the colours are far from dull! I think you did a great job on both those fronts, but if you wanted to improve it still, maybe some clear an”
“Hi there! I don't think your cape was too unreadable in the first place actually, but it could use a bit more direction. The way I approach folds is always to first pinpoint the tension points, in thi”
“Hello there! I think you were pretty close to the answer already, all I did was clean up what was already there! c: The difficult thing with this pose is showing that the leg which is tucked undernea”
“Ngl, this piece made me excited to do a traditional piece with markers again, so first off, thank you! Secondly, I think you could improve this by doing a final lineart pass over the piece. Especially”
“Hi there! I think you are honestly so close to mastering this style, I had trouble picking up on anything so I really had to start nitpicking and I noticed sometimes your linework can be a bit more co”
“Please tell me this is an icon for a Youtube channel where we can see you draw more of these because this is adorable!! You also hit the nail on the head I think, the eyes should look like they wrap a”
“Hello! First off, digimon d&d sounds amazing where do I sign up- secondly, I think the scarf is a pretty easy fix, just make sure it looks chunky enough so it indeed still reads on a small format and ”
“Hello! In terms of anatomy I changed the head proportion compared to the body a little bit and I also made sure the right part of her face feels like it is curving away from us by adjusting the eye sh”
“Hi there! I think you've got the individual parts right, but looking at the proportions and where they are exactly on the face will help a lot! c: I copied it again on the side so you can see the line”
“Hi there! Honestly this was already so cute, I think you could leave it as is, but I added in a few small details to make it a bit more cuter still! I think highlighting that she has rounder cheeks wo”
“Hello! You've hit the nail on the head, I think a big part of creating individualism in anime figures revolves around variation shape language. The eyes is always the first thing people look at, so I ”
“Hi there! You're right, it can get very heavy very quickly this way. With eyelashes and hair in general, it's best to think in shapes rather than lines in anime. So cluster together a thicker upper la”
“Hi there! I am amazed to see your progress with these, absolutely stunning work! I will have to nitpick very heavily. Let's start with the silhouette, you do a great job leaving these negative spaces ”
“Hi there! This is such an epic setup! I think the characters could be slightly more defined in terms of value with the background and layers. One other thing to consider is that in your scenen, every ”
“Hi there! Sometimes the lines between what is what kind of blur with these sort of things, but you are absolutely right that that part of the inside would also be considered form shadow! Great job! c:”
“Hello!! You've made my job pretty easy cause you pinpointed exactly what I wanted to discuss! I think the head was turning a bit too far to still feel natural, I also think the original left shoulder ”
“Hi there!! I think this is a pretty great portrait already, but I see what you mean... I think the eye and the eyebrow don't look like they're fitting together just yet (as the brow sits on the brow r”
“Hi there! Theys guys look like they're about to drop the album of the year, I love it :D I think the anatomy and gesture of the guy can be a bit smoother, right now the connection between the head/nec”
“Hi there! Cool character! When it comes to lighting in this piece, my advice would be to determine where that lighting is coming from first, and then applying it consistently. What I mean is that on t”
“Hi there! You did a fantastic job, to prove it I used your base to draw this into a shelf for our flower pot! Sometimes your own solutions will differ from what is being shown afterwards because there”