Hello! You've done a great job here! I really like the sense of movement in the illustration. Overall, the characters are working well, but I'd make a couple of adjustments. Since the camera is positioned very close to the bottom edge of the canvas, the top ellipse of the upper cylindrical form should appear a bit rounder rather than so narrow. Another thing I noticed is that parts of the foreground character get a bit lost against the midground character because you have a dark-over-dark relationship. Ideally, you want to create more dark-over-light contrast in those areas. Adding a subtle layer of atmospheric haze between the two characters would help separate them and improve the depth of the scene. You could also reduce the scale of the midground character slightly to create a stronger sense of size and distance between the two figures. Thanks for sharing your submission! | Artwod Feedback