Hi Jord! You've already been given some really great feedback for the heads so I'm going to add in some advice for the body. Anime is very stylised, so when you want to introduce a bit more detail and realism, you have to think about how folds behave and wrap around a form in a more realistic way. At the moment it feels like it is floating a bit around the neck, without structure. Try to simplify the shapes you already had going on, so you just leave enough information in to indicate the flow and changing of the folds. Keep it up, this is a really cool sketchbook page! | Artwod Feedback