Forgot to upload the overdrawing lol
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Hey there! Be careful with the length of the neck and how it connects to the head. You've drawn the neck too long and narrow, which makes the character look disproportionate. The neck shouldn't be so elongated and narrow. Hope this helps!
I love the character you’ve created and the lighting is good. Just an idea but seeping the shadow side a bit and adding a couple of cast shadows from the hair could help the drama and believability. As far as the expression goes,playing with the eyebrows can do a lot for the expression without touching anything else. Hope these ideas give you some things to think about.
thank you so much for the feedback!
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feeling a little skeptical with this piece. just want some feedback on the rendering… also I want to practice with emotions and is wondering if this looks “expressive” enough
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