Hey, this is a nice drawing, lots of good stuff. The one thing I noticed is some tangents, so I did a quick sketch to show you how you could fix them, I hope it helps :)
maybe keep the sword edge and shoulder gap as two clean shapes on the next pass, then check the leg overlaps with a simple silhouette so those tangents stay clear.
the quick sketch makes the tangent issue much clearer, maybe separate the sword edge from the shoulder first, then use a tiny silhouette check on the lower leg before adding detail.
idk if every tangent needs a fix first, maybe block in the far shoulder behind the sword and leave a little gap where the glove meets the thigh so those shapes stop merging