Hello there! Well, the proportions feel a little off to me. The head is slightly too large, while the right hand is a bit too small. You could also draw the body slightly in 3/4 so that it follows the sideways movement of the head. This will make the pose feel more natural and less forced. Hope this helps!
Thank you so much! I do see it now, I'll go back and fix it!
Replying to @amelialala
My pleasure! Glad it helped! :D