@pifalo

“If you build your pose out of shapes first, it will help you with your proportions. I did a quick sketch to show how you can lean out your character, I hope it helps :)”

“You need to pull the whole eye socket out a little so that you can add that far cheek and it will look right. I hope the sketch helps :)”

“Use 3D shapes to build your figure on. This will make it easier for you to work out the proportions and anatomy. Then add your details on top of that structure. I hope my sketch helps :)”

“Always begin with a 3D mannequin. Build it from forms that will help you to add clothes and other details. I hope my sketch is helpful, try to study it and see how it can helps you :)”

“The biggest issue with the back is that it lacks volume. This happens if we don't think about the underlying egg shape of the rib cage. I did a quick sketch to show you how it works, I hope it helps :”

“My suggestion is to keep it simple. Get your drawing right, pick a light direction, use only 4 values. Separating the shadows from the lights should already give you a good foundation. Then adding a c”

“I think the issue is that the facial features are too big, making the face look cartoonish. If you bring them back to realistic proportions, it should help. I did a quick sketch to show you, I hope it”

“The first thing you have to do is pick a light direction. This will help you place your shadows and highlights. Then, think about the folds of the fabric as 3D shapes and light them as such. I did a ”

“The anatomy is a little lumpy and round and the waist is pretty small. The right bicep should be in front of the right deltoid and the right forearm is a bit small. I did a quick sketch to show you wh”

“Here is a suggestion for an outfit, and what the anatomy and gesture should look like. Study the drawing and see how perspective and folds in the clothing work and how to use reference in your design.”

“I like the pose, it has a lot of gesture and attitude. Your right, the torso can use some work, I hope my sketch helps :)”

“Your facial features look pretty good already. I would move the mouth up a little, leave some room between the lower lid and the iris, and make sure you put a break in the eyebrow at the end. I don't ”

“The issue with this pose is that it is off balance, she feels like she is going to fall over. By moving the right leg in and changing the arms makes the pose feel way more balanced and natural. I did ”

“The way we can direct the eye to our focal point has less to do with color and more to do with contrast. Hard lines draw our attention, soft ones don't, bright colors against dark, warm against cool, ”

“Nice drawing. What I'm seeing is that the nose is a little long which is pushing the mouth down too far. Also, try to add some darker values in the eye sockets to make the eyes feel like they are set”

“I like the pose and the energy of the twist in the torso. I'm not sure the left hand makes sense for the pose though. My sketch shows how I would light it because doing it this way makes it feel like ”

“Your doing the right thing, and your boxes are pretty much in the right perspective and proportion. I think you need to be more deliberate about how you draw them so that you can build your figure mor”

“What I do with facial expressions is make it cartoony, and then figure out how I can apply it to my face. If you look at the little face I did in the sketch you'll see what I mean. Then I applied what”

“Start with gesture and it will improve your poses. For example, what is the right arm doing? why is it sticking out there? You have a nice tilt of the head and shoulders, so tilt the hips to give it m”

“This is a nice drawing and has nice gesture. I think it would improve if you added more anatomical shape to the legs and arms. Also pay attention to your proportions, but in general you're on the righ”

“The eagle eye point of view, depending on how extreme it is, can make things look wrong because we are used to seeing things from our point of view. We have a tendency to straighten things up and ”

“This is a nice drawing. The only thing I can see is that the rib cage sticks out kind of extreme. If you just soften it a bit you should be fine :)”

“You need to set up a two point perspective for panel 1 and a one point perspective for panel 2. The perspective you have now is off, but setting it up ahead of time will really help. I did a quick ske”

“Remember to have gravity effect the hair and to build the pose from 3D shapes. These things will help with a complicated pose such as this one. I did a sketch to show you, I hope it helps :)”