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“your base was already close and i dont recommend just adding rim highlights, what was lacking was colors in the highlights and shadows, think about ambient light,, warm vs light shadow/highlight and...”

“my suggestion is to learn about gesture balance, place forms in a sense where weight distribution plays into your drawing, next i would look at anime reference of eyes at different angles. i recommend...”

“try to bring your sense of 3d into your gestures as well, I see that you lack landmarks of protruding joints, indents, adding those will greatly enhance structure. to additionally being mindful of ski...”

“my suggestion is to think about the position and flow of the whole arm and hand before committing to rendering them, the lipstick missed highlights that defined the form, and dont forget that clothes ...”