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Morstatix LastName · 2026-07-14T16:22:00.181Z

this is an old print of mine so theres a lot off, but my main issue is that i still cant shake in my current art is the struggle of black clothing over black clothing losing contrast. the area where black clothing overlays on other black clothing just feels very confusing for the eye. especially when im too scared to use true black. i tried to add a darker shadow but it just didnt do much. this is a consistent struggle of mine, i feel like especially with my harsh lines, but i dont want to change my lining style too much because i like the toony look. thank you in advance!!

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