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Improve your construction and spatial thinking, a 3 min read
Build expressive portraits using the Loomis head method, Reilly rhythms, and shadow mapping to establish structure, flow, and clear lighting before adding final details.
Portraits


Your Paddle & your Canoe !
Second path, decided to explore back one of the first poses since I really appreciated the it. I also loved the result of the end of my first session, so I decided to go for the same style.

Ball
Idk I why it doesn't have that soft 3d form please correct this if can

Your Paddle & your Canoe !
First path, I did few small iteration, not sure if all of them are here, But I think this is it.

Box method(goated or nah?)
I was wondering if this is how you use box method ,you draw the outline of box then draw the body base on its proportion in the box but for some reason my head ,arm ,leg proportion look inaccurate compare to the 3 major mass of the box I use,is it because idk the arm,leg proportion or the ribcage and pelvis?

Bloodline-Character Lineup by KIZSTKCH
Simple rendering like with cel-shading possibly some highlights. Also hands both idle and gestural.

Portrait of a black woman
This was a more experimental piece, but I'm unhappy with how two-dimensional it feels. I was hoping to get some advice on how to emphasize the planes and contours of the face to make it feel more sculptural. I have a tendency to lean on too-harsh lighting to make up for struggling with conveying subtleties, so anything with softer lighting specifically would be a great help.

greenmeadow tower
i'm looking for help improving this design. any feedback or suggestions would be greatly appreciated.

Environment Concept
Not my latest piece but the concept is a fantasy world with floating lands. I think I have difficulty with the rendering, like why doesn’t it look sharp on the edges of the clouds, the land, grass, etc? Should I use a lasso tool, or a brush shape that has a sharp edge? Plus I am also not sure with the perspective. I’m looking forward to receiving feedback on what to improve with this piece. Big thanks!

Toxic wooden bear
Im struggling with creating belivable values, textures and overall painting the shapes and forms, i woullike some feedback about thouse subjects and anatomy an design as well would be appreciated