@pvppoh

Paintover

Hi friend! your drawing is really nice, your style has a really appealing softness to it. To be honest, the biggest piece of feedback i can give you is to practise with seeing your subject in 3d in your head, and drawing with these 3d volumes in mind. your lighting for example feels kind of all over the place right now. if you focus on practicing your 3d visualisation, it is much easier to imagine a direction for the light and where the shadows would be. I also made some minor proportional tweaks based on thinking in 3d. You already have very nice art as is, I think that if you practise this principle you can really bring your art to the next level! Good luck!

@fosco

Paintover

Hello here! I love your render so far, it looks really good! I’d suggest something simple: define the shadows a bit more. It doesn’t need to be anything too strong or high-contrast, but adding some subtle shadow definition will help create more volume, since the face feels a bit flat right now. I’d also slightly increase the saturation of the portrait so the skin tones stand out more and don’t look too pale. You could add a bit of saturation to areas like the nose, parts of the neck, and the ears. Again, keep it subtle so you don’t lose the original intention of the piece. Great work, and hope this helps!