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Improve your features and structure, a 3 min read
Build expressive portraits using the Loomis head method, Reilly rhythms, and shadow mapping to establish structure, flow, and clear lighting before adding final details.
Portraits


Studying value organization with that one checkered optical Illusion.
I find myself overthinking if the values are light or dark enough. God help me if i have to start coloring.

Dress drapes
I'm having trouble creating the "spiky drapes" at the end of her dress, especially at the front ; also the skirt is meant to be very tight around the thighs and pelvis/waist, are the lines right here ?

Figure drawing
I tend of having a bad habit of making the head sometimes too large on my figures and I struggle connecting the rib cage with the head. Also some inconsistencies with the limbs as well. You can also include any other things that I need to work on.

Ship and waves
I dont know how to improve it substancially, maybe the waves look weird?

MONKEY
I am struggling making this monkey have powerful impacks on the ground if you any suggestions that be helpful.

Gobtonio
Revision! Decided to change teeth so they look less vampiric and more goblin like.

3 values study
This my 3 values study, is there any mistake or anything I can improve on? Since I couldn't find my own mistake. Thank you.

First colored portrait
This is my first ever colored portrait. Feels like my values are way too light, wanted to make it darker but I just can't get it right. The ear is kinda bad, didn't take my time there it was mainly a coloring/value focused practice

Leonardo (the turtle one)
Lines values and forms a bit off I think.