For feedback #2 I try to follow the extreme tilt indicated by the position of the ear to the brow ridge, and also following how much is visible of the side plane of the head. That would shift the entire view more towards profile, the centerline of the face would move to the left, and you'd have to wrap the features of the face much more around, also with the nose potentially overlapping most of the eye. With this kind of extreme tilt though the angle of the jaw and cheek would shift a lot as well, and even more of the hairline would sit basically hidden behind the curvature of the cranium. So your intuition was correct, but you chose a notoriously tricky angle to draw either way, and got a bit lost in the carefull construction of the basic shape and planes of the head I fear. The construction of the front parts of the face and the indication of the planar shifts with values though is already very promising though, and in the construction phase you would have mostly avoided the off-feeling by mostly moving the ear up and adjusting the shape of the side plane a little bit. You'll get there in no time! Ta-ta~ | Artwod Feedback