HI, that's a nice idea. No need to be ashemed, you did a first step. What your drawing needs is refinement of forms. Try to pay more attention on how elipses work in perspective, out cuts of one form into anothe to be sure that they are placed correctely in space. Draw elipses for top and bottom of cylinders to orint them better in space. Hope this helps to move with the drawing further, and keep up the good work!
Hi, thank you for the feedback! I like to draw cylinders but sometimes the perspective is a bit tricky, especially when I draw directly in ink or pen (like this time). I'll work on that! 👍