First of all, very nice mood for the scene and very cool shot. I would give extra care to the perspective since it's a 3 point one and these are cheeky, so I retraced the sofa and I tried and give something to grasp on for the table in front of Spike. (glass and one of the table foot) Regarding the pose, your shoulder should surround more of the head. When you rise your arm, you can notice that the shoulder is following (part of the body mechanic) and when you sit down in a more casual way like Spike here, most of the time the shoulder system will relaxe and you will have the head sink in-between the relaxed muscles of the shoulders. I also elongated his pose since he's relaxed. That's what our body will have the tendency to do most of the time, just sink into the couch. With those changes I think your character will feel moe set and I don't think you will have to change to much of the face. I think the face AND the hair are looking nice. (if you want to push for more graphic shape for the hair, be my guest but it's working so far) Hope this feedback will be helpfull. Don't hesitate if you have any questions. Cheers ! | Artwod Feedback