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Good practice, you are on the right track, make sure to draw the perspective correctly, even if you draw the hidden pages, the same rules apply. For a better understanding, extend the sides of the cube, they should always run towards one point. Depending on whether you draw 1 point, 2 or 3 point perspective. Take a look, I hope this helps you. youtube StudioYArt Ps Sorry for the translation, is with Google.
The issue I see here is that the 2-point perspective boxes aren’t following the same logic as the 1-point perspective boxes. In the 1-point perspective examples, the boxes go from looking “narrower” to “wider” (from top to bottom) because of their distance from the horizon line. In other words, the first box is closer to the horizon line, which is why the top plane appears narrower. Meanwhile, the third box feels more “open” because it’s farther away from the horizon line. That same concept should also apply to the 2-point perspective boxes. Notice how the first one should appear narrower because it’s closer to the horizon line, while the third one should feel wider due to being farther away. It’s the same principle I mentioned in the previous feedback about ellipses. Also, try to make sure that your parallel lines converge more accurately toward the vanishing points. Hope this helps!
Improve your construction and spatial thinking, a 3 min read
Master plein air painting by analyzing compositions, sketching real environments, building value structures, and layering color to create immersive landscapes.
Environment
character design
HI Srugling with colours , not sure if its look good to eyes, is this background colour ok for this character , please suggest what should i have to work on
Mermaid
Made improvment of the hands.
WIP Jay Enhypen
I am struggling with capturing his face from my refrence, I made a mistake with choosing my reference a bit, I chose the refrence pose where the face wasn't fully visible and used other refrence for his face so I had to adjust the face angle and how he is looking at the viewer which led to facial structure changes, I can't add my reference in this site because it doesn't support more images. I want you to help me with how do I make look more like Jay.
Page 2 (day 2)
Page 2 (day 2) Trying to be consistent with the challenge. In this drawing, can someone teach me how to make simple backgrounds? ( Other adivces is good too!)
2 sketchbook page
Some arm studys. I wanted to practice the anatomy for the ice arm of the eleven archer character
About linework in general
I finished it by adding this little walrus imp thing. I believe this is currently the absolute limit of my abilities. If there is anything to improve in this i am currently blind to it. I see this as a problem, since if i do not recognize my mistakes i cannot improve further, therefore if anyone can poke holes in this it would be deeply appreciated. Or maybe i should just start learning values already, since linework is kinda the only thing i've ever done.
Ice archer
I got some feedback and tried Applying it, but my request still stands. I think it’s better now, but it could be even better, so any advice on the render or materials like the leather or the ice would help. Thanks!
Behemoth thumbnail idea
I feel like I’m struggle with a few parts to this piece. First one is just the anatomy of the giant. The stomping foot over the figure seems off or maybe it’s the alignment of the back leg. I feel like I like this angle and composition but maybe it’s not as believable as it should be? Any help would be amazing! Also I’m sure I should adjust the colors too, it’s supposed to be a snowy mountain like landscape but I didn’t really set up a good foundation to depict that. Many thanks to all you talented helpers!
Day 2 : Watercolour Foxgloves
Time to dust off the watercolours!