dont be scared to push the pose! also i think the lighting from the sabers could be fun to add :)
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Your improvement is very noticeable! I would recommend giving more character and story to the pose. Pinterest is one of my favorite places for pose reference. I also recommend adding a bit more shadow.
Hello :) Cool Jedi ! Yeah the pose is a bit flat-rigid indeed. If the light-sabers are ignited there is probably danger, so no straight back pose. You could use a martial artist picture as reference. Or draw from imagination. Artwod gives blog helps on that : - You have good shape - You have ok proportion - Try rotating the main axis of the body : neck, shoulders and the pelvic bone. preferably not parallel to each other. I'm not an expert myself, but it is what I try to do. Hope It helps.
(in purple are your lines that are highly symmetrical, in yellow my proposition)
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I think the composition/pose is still too flat- rigid ??
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