Looking at the difference in style between your portraits, done two years apart, I have to say you've improved. But when I looked closely at the drawing, I focused on the face and noticed some mistakes. I tried to trace it using the Loomis method. I highly recommend studying it, because if learned, it can significantly improve your faces. And note how obvious your mistakes are. All in all, though, you did a good job and did well. Congratulations! | Artwod Feedback