Hello there! Cool character! However, the orientation of the pelvis is a bit off. The pelvis seems to be facing the camera, while the legs are pointing to the side. Ideally, the legs should follow the direction of the pelvis. To make the pose look more natural, notice how I drew the pelvis at a slight three-quarter angle instead of keeping it in a front view. This makes the twist in the pose feel more natural. On the other hand, the orientation of the arms, particularly the raised arm, makes it look like it's tilting backward. This arm should be pointing to the side rather than backward, which would make the pose feel more natural and believable. Hope this helps, and keep it up!

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Luke Sioson · 2026-10-04T04:29:54.152Z

Trying to use same character for the whole Inktober challenge. In this piece practicing more form and spatial awareness

@fosco5 days ago

Hello there! Cool character! However, the orientation of the pelvis is a bit off. The pelvis seems to be facing the camera, while the legs are pointing to the side. Ideally, the legs should follow the direction of the pelvis. To make the pose look more natural, notice how I drew the pelvis at a slight three-quarter angle instead of keeping it in a front view. This makes the twist in the pose feel more natural. On the other hand, the orientation of the arms, particularly the raised arm, makes it look like it's tilting backward. This arm should be pointing to the side rather than backward, which would make the pose feel more natural and believable. Hope this helps, and keep it up!

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